Sunday, February 15, 2009

Mimic Poem


The Flower (original)

From a bud in a patch of sand

To a beautiful flower that knows

Right from wrong,

Left from right.


A Flower that has dreams,

And wants to for fill those dreams,

And will let no one stop it.


A Flower that deals with situations,

drama as you might say


A Flower that maybe an inspiration to other flowers,

That will grow and bloom forever.


A Flower that has a future,

A Flower which is me! :)



The Crayon (mimic)

From a single crayon in a school box of supplies

To a desk full of tools that know

Letter from number,

Bright from dull.


A Crayon that has goals,

And wants to fill those goals,

And will let no other crayon stop it.


A Crayon that deals with dirty hands,

Obstacles as you might say


A Crayon that may change the lives of others,

That will help and serve forever,


A Crayon that is going many places,

A Crayon that is me! :)

2 comments:

  1. Favorite line "a crayon that deals with dirty hands" ... makes me picture young students just in from the playground, grabbing up a crayon to create ... also makes me want to say "go wash your hands"!

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  2. I really like your poem because it was easy to imagine in my mind. It made me think about our groups poem how we gave the jeans a life.

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