Thursday, February 12, 2009

Mimic Poem



Original "Do you Remember?"-Jack Johnson

Do you remember when we were kids?

It was warm

When we would play

Outside for hours

You would set up chairs

And we would sell lemonade

Beneath a red, yellow, blue umbrella

Enjoying the sun

We would dart through the sprinkler

Green grass stuck to our feet

Mom wouldn’t let us in

Please dry off first

Drawing designs with the chalk

That would stain our hands

And wash away sometime soon

When soft rain fell

Stood barefoot beneath a gray, wondrous sky

Splashing gleefully together, waiting for a call

To hurry inside, you’ll get sick

And we would go

Inside our childhood home

Quite pleased

Do you remember?


4 comments:

  1. Your picture makes me smile and so does your poem. It's so hard to get fresh cut grass off of wet feet ...

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  2. I love your poem! I can remember back when I was a kid, drawing with sidewalk chalk and playing outside. I like your words "drawing designs with the chalk, that would stain our hands, and wash away sometime soon."

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  3. Annie great job! Seriously I love the version you made. I could put myself in the poem and I really think tha tyou did a wonderful job!

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  4. Can't we go back here please? lol
    this poem is awesome, and really brings us back to our childhood.

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